Wednesday, September 12, 2007

sarah and ethan

first Chapter named bombshell

The appearance of Sarah and Ethan

* Start out with describing ethan, and use the context of him with his friend .
(need name for friend, jon, wes, will, chris?)
* Using the Setting of the Church Youth Group environment Introduce various friends , then the appearance of sarah ordeal comes up... Ethan is talking fine, but when sarah walks by, ethan freezes up. will notices him, and does the guy thing, hits him on the back and tells him hes acting strange or something along those lines. Ethan Just sighs, and becomes somewhat silent, and goes to be alone for a while, freshens up in the bathroom or something....

move on to next scene

Tuesday, September 04, 2007

it may be a love story but DO NOT be straightforward about it, and do not go into the thoughts of either of the two at the beginning...or try not too, use other ways to convey this story,... Each Chapter is a huge undertaking and a work of art.!
chapters: (draft)
1. Meet characters, ethan, sarah, friends. perspective=third person (ethan) setting church.
2. Turn of events News cast, make it very believeable with research.
3. hide out in a water drain for the night.
4. late night run to woods?
5. faith in God...where do we run. Include a miracle
6. Formulate a plan.
7. Get out of the country.


Be thinking on this alot...forget about computers for a few months.!!! Love God

/*******************/ The Rebellion \******************************\

Rebellion starts on the western coast, and all surviving key officials and those qualified to make action do so. Order is given for all military vehicles that can be commanded to move out immediately to san fran. San fran was chosen because it is a good port, texas san fran , and mexico helps out where they can

outline

story title: no name

trying to write as much as I can without stopping...allready doubt sets in, but i firmly believe that I can do this if I set my mind to it.

Outline
Beginning, meet the characters
Sarah(brooke) ethan(devon)
simple devon likes brooke but things dont work out... Keep a good perspective on it, and constantly change viewpoints.

main plot:
the lives of 2 young individuals are changed forever, as a nation and religion are attacked, the genocide of an entire race, Muslims run over america in the end. ethan and sarah narrowly avoid their own extermination, the events throw the two of them together, and they work hard at avoiding the new evil authorities in play.

Perspective:
Back and fourth from Sarah and Ethan, and deepen the plot with that of others, muslims, american authorities trying to re-establish themselves.


I believe that this can be a very good book and an interesting read. God Please have your hand over this.